disturbing, unsettling, u know the drill

if you don't mind my saying, you seem like a religious person, which is really cool. keep writing, i really like your stuff. so realistic, like a (excuse the figure of speech) 'breath of fresh air'.

hi!! read ur poem here. it's really good! wish i could write poems like that, especially since my teacher last year made the whole class write a billion of them. and she read them. yay. but i really like this poem! yeah.

Nice job, i'll just complain to you tomorrow

your right. it has no plot what-so-eva. but it is so much better than my balloon story, which i've been editing all night.

it is very very deep. and nifty. very very nifty. and spiffy *is typing this in between using the spiffer on her nails* lol

as 4 spelling errors...my spelling sucks more than urs, so im of no help there.

aren't i such a helpful friend?

very deep. great poem really makes ya think. you really should keep a writin.
C ya
Silvertress
(don't forget spell check can be your friend. Even if I myself suck at it.)

That's very good. Certain parts I didn't understand, but this is deep emotion in it, which gives it something extra. Great job