o.o col... i'm serious, it's intriguing, it has a plot and it's-it's intriguing...please don't hurt me, please don't hurt me...

Whoa...it's almost chilling, in a way. You must write more! I'll be back...

(Please don't quiz me! Augh!!)

This is so intriguing...cold-as-steel and darkly mysterious. Don't worry about being too scientific. I make stuff up all the time ;)

Good luck on this venture and all others in the future!

Some information on the brain, since you requested it. :)

First, the brain itself wouldn't need to be numbed for the surgery, since brains are nerveless. You can actually perform minor brain-surgery on someone while they're conscious, and they don't feel pain. Only the surrounding tissue (on the part of the skull they cut through) needs to be numbed.

Also, the parts of the brain responsible for emotion aren't located on the cortex (the brain's outermost layer), they're buried deeper, in the limbic system. Structures such as the amygdala and hippcampus are responsible for certain emotions; removing parts of those can make an animal (or, presumably, a person) more docile.

This is extremely interesting. The space angel's account of mass wasn't totally correct...but hey, she is seven years old. I really like the format of the message before the action of the plot. You are going to continue, aren't you?

This really intrigued me, write more Wusai!XD