Painful...this I can identify with a bit. I love it.

u use liek a lotta big wurds huh?

You are such an amazing writer. I enjoyed this poem very much. It really touched me and reminded me of being around someone I had once loved. Nice job!

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I can't think of much else to say, except great work!

Oh, Norah. . .beautiful. Just gorgeous.

...Very beautiful. The details of the greater and lesser things in life, in the relationship; clothed in a cape of drama and mystery... Haunting yet it shows a glimmer of hope that conflicts will be resolved...

Oh, this was the poem you had on your blog, right?

Beautiful, beautiful job, as always, Norah.

oooo great! loved it

wow...I'm speechless from the imagery you have created. Simply beautiful and eloquent, not to mention emotional. I can feel the longing in your words. Excellent job.

that's so... emotional I must say. The words provoke a power that's all through out the poem. nice work!