Its good i hope you can continue soon!

These last two chapters were really good. Can't wait to see what happens next.

hey wow, you're fast in updating... and me? i need to plan and plan and PLAN and THIS is the kind of mark i got for my compo!! what life.
you really used jaze?! wahaha.
and hmm, not trying to be youknowwhat but i use ]-----[ you use }------{ and >------

This is real gud u shud rite sum more, i like!

here i am. i dont give a damn to anything in life anyway. [perhaps maybe the Lights...want to get out of this sucky place] anyway have got anything to say abt the definition of the title? mwahaha. no copyright lah, but YOU! nvm.

tt person [what's his name anyway][jaze?] sounds kinda 'weak' leh. a bit sissy if u dont mind. but my one is also like tt. ahaha. same sama baboo same. im not as good as you think. i thank the one who invented the thesaurus and kill the one who invented the sundial. [time time time...]

havent made much comments abt fj. anyway sounds a bit sweet valley to me. gniq said tt also. argh. i hate tt author. her stories suck. anyway shall not spread my hate of sth to everyone out there. good! add sesame oil hor.

yO CYX~ haha.... sO glaD tO see u here manz... i'm neW here tOo, hOpe U'll read and review my fic manz.. mine's not very gOod.. hahaz. deuterium said mine have some straits of sweet valley in it... haahaz, and i can see it in ur fic too, i guess muz be from last yr we madly follow the series of senior year rem? hahaz... aniwae, i think it's pretty good for a beginner man, jiayOu~ i think i need to work harder. wOo~ tataz... i think deuterium's stories rox...yar? ahahz... let's folow in her example and write such gd stories(wif our own style) hahaz.. yea man, tt's all lar... tataz.=)

thanks for the reviews :) i shall be back soon with chapt 2... working on it now...
grinz....

I thought it was good, i hope you continue so i can read more.

GOOD START I LIKE IT :] WHEN DO YOU PLAN ON WRITING THE SECOND CHAPTER?

This sounds like an extremely well written start. I like it so far. :) Keep writing! I would like to see how this story goes along.

This is a really good start to a story *nods*... especially since it's your first. you've impressed me. ^_^

That is really good! But I'm a sucker for romance...I dunno...your story has depth...PLEASE, PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!