I really love the unique rhyme scheme to this one. Keep

I could add to the anxiety by saying: But did you really choose the wrong one? or could the wrong one just seem like the wrong one and actually be the right one? or is it just plainly the wrong one and this is all convoluted and twisted?. And i'll stop now because i'm not helping.

Wow...

I like the rhyme scheme...

You are great...

I can't think in actual sentences...

No really, this was a great poem. You are an already great poet, becoming better all the time.

:Darrell M:

very nice! love the eratic rhyme scheme, it makes you read on. Your poems are getting better and better. Will you come to the Tapestry coffee house this friday and read some of your poems?

pretty good