wow, that was a very interesting story. i wasnt sure about the fallen angel for a second. i like your writing style as well. good job!

That was one of the most well-written pieces that I've come across. Your choice of words gives an almost holy feeling to the story, even though it's about temptation and such. I can't wait to read more of your work!

Wow, how captivating.

Wow. That was awesome. Your descriptions are BEAUTIFUL. I love the way you wrote this, all of it. The priest's obsession with words was a very nice touch. He was extremely well developed (hard to do in a short story) and believable. I love this.

Bravo! This was very good! I loved it from start to finish.

This story is excellent..You're my favorite author here! Please keep writing, I'd love to read something similar to this again.

in the begining there was the word, but twisted by men it will become the end.
I enjoyed your story, thank you.

I've read a few fics 'n such, but by far, this is prolly my newest favorite. I absolutely adore your way of writing, be it in this or any of your wonderful FF8 fics... Absolutely chilling, beautiful... *rambles* o.o;;

this was probably one of, if not the exclusive, best stories i read on here.

Interesting enough that I read it all the way through (If it's not, I'll quit right away) but not clear enough in some spots. Still, did enjoy it, and I like your writting style. Will have to wait and see what you turn out next.

Even if you say no one understands you, love, you know that I do. I would have asked him for Japanese.

What can I say? I love it. I really like the way the languages are mentioned throughout it, and the ending with the baby feels really appropriate; it works better than if it had just ended when the priest died. Oh yes... that phrase, "words like hot sweet stars".... Lovely.

Thank you, thank you. *applause* Damn, but it's been a long time since someone wrote a fic like this that I was ~grateful~ for. I'm not often impressed by fics that use Christianity in any way, but it's about damn time someone pointed out that priests aren't safe from temptation. Thank you.