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Reviews For: Waiting

Toad-Frog
2002-12-06
ch 1,
abuseYour words are so smooth. Your guy must be one lucky dude. Awesome! Keep writing!
Dogmeat
2002-10-29
ch 1,
abuseHeh... cool!

Whenever I try to write something like that, the phone would ring off the hook while I was halfway through writing the poem and I would lose my train of thought. Good to see that doesn't happen to everyone...

Good work!!!
Needa S
2002-10-21
ch 1,
abuseSad! You did a good job puting it together check me out sometime and keep writing!
Namir Swiftpaw
2002-10-21
ch 1,
abuseThis is good, except for one thing -

I think it should be continued. It seems unfinished.

Other than that, I liked it. ^_^

Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw
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