|Reviews for Artificial|
| Brinneh 4/4/05 . chapter 1
I really like this poem...the short lines make it more intense and give it a drum-like beat. Very nice.
| nacay 2/1/04 . chapter 1
i have to agree with everyone else that poem is neat. don't stop writing!
| translucence 9/15/03 . chapter 1
Wow. I don't know what to say - it's incredible, touching, stunning.
| til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton 1/4/03 . chapter 1
I hope you don't stop writing poetry you have a way to convey things of truth into unforgettable poems. On to read the rest.
| Miss Kissranada 11/7/02 . chapter 1
ohhhhh this is so very good!
The last two lines are a very good way to end the poem. Love it!
| Aathiya Lia 10/26/02 . chapter 1
I'm still chewing on it; the subject matter is perfectly understandable, but to to convey how or what is a bit beyond me *sheepish grin*. To say it's good is trite. It's sublime. DO NOT STOP WRITING ;)