I felt that this, despite being an excellent poem, was not your best. It wasn't as easy to read as most of your others, it kept a rather shaky flow, but still, it was excellent, and your symbolism what shockingly powerful. Good work.

Sal

Wow, nice poem! It's short and very clear, although in some cases you might want to try giving more hints and let the readers figure it out for themselves. Still, I like it a lot, and it is very true!

How true. Deep stuff...my Public Speaking teacher would love this...maybe I'll send him over to see it _

With facing fears comes more pain. I can't bear to live with more pain. I have enough already. Very nice poem though.

I like this. Its nice. A reminder to all that life is about risks. Coincidence or not, the way you write the last three ligs are well done. Alliterates are always nice in poems when well done. Continue to write :D

YIN

Too true, good topic. And btw, thanks for reviewing for me!