This is an amazing poem. Flaming weasels, what can I say? But it's brilliant.

How often have you been to Swansea? You describe it so well...

I agree with the other reviewers: it's a great poem, very well-written, and the German line is well-placed. I admire how you can express your feelings with such good imagery and in such a precise form. If there's anything I can do to make your lonely world better, please tell me.

poignantly sad; very good imagery. (I hope you aren't writing from experience.) :)

I like this. Interesting inclusion of the line of German - I think it realy adds to the poem. You make great use of rhyme as well.

Ok - please, please, please write more poetry. You have a real talent for it kid. This is your best work to date - the way you can maintain such a strict rhyme scheme without sacrificing any of the theme or impact of the poem is masterful.

*is speechless* That is amazing!!! Truly awesome!! One of the best poems I'm ever read!! Wow! That's some wonderful talent you've got there!!