Good story. I remember this from school time. It is too weird! :) The green eyes in the locker... next?

my word u finally updated lol and can i say this? Cliffhangers suck! lol continue or i shall hit u w/...fish! mwahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!
~LadyLaura020

Great start! Cliff hangers are sooo frustrating! I want to know what is going to happen next!

w00t! ^_^ Good story. Some of your sentences could be better, though. "Alex stepped in before Ally got madder and threw a punch." I don't think you would say "madder", you could change it to angrier or furious. Thesauri (Thesauruses..whichever) are very useful in editing stories. ^_^
Otherwise, this is a very interesting story and I hope you add more!

~TBH (unincorporated)

nice begining, i'm looking forward to seeing what happens next! keep going!

HURRY UP AND CONTINUE! ITS SOO COOL

Ooohhh I like this. Wonder what will happen next plz continue!!!!!!!

~Ladylaura020~