Metaphoric by any chance?... :)

Beautiful.

makes u value life doesn't it? sometimes the most simple of things makes ur life oh so miserible...

~Ladylaura020~

yo! this totally relates to a certain poo head who was pooey to u! one crack and it all falls down. i Love bio. i mean LOVE it. ;) physbiochem!
geuss who wrote this?

A moving poem that makes a one think about life, especially the fact that something great can be destoryed by the tiniest flaw.

Excellent. the best poem I've read on here for a while. At last a poem that tries to be original and succeeds. It has rhythm, form and I like it a lot. Good job.