Ahhh! Poor Avery, oh and i'm glad she's got a friend now, it's good for somebody to heal after the long, almost endless trip of mourining... to mourn is a normal process in daily life, cuz don't people die everyday? Well this chapter was fairly emotional, which is good, a piece of writing that can bring fourth the emotions which lies in the unending depths of our hearts is truly good. Great chapter, hope you continue your awesome work!

sorry but i cant find a plot so im not even go to attempttp read this story. i hope that you can develop some form of a plot but i not interested enough to know.

Great story! Keep up the good work! _

Oh my god. That was amazing. I cried more than once. Wow. Continue writing, you're talented.

yay! a friend! how is Ralph related to Marcus(rich boy-can't remember his name for sure)? interesting story.

I've read your WK fics before at other sites, so I know how good you are. This fic is so relatable, and the emotion is so intense. I hope it won't be all angst?

That was great! I was never too interested in original stories, but since you were the author, I decided to read it anyway. And I must say you did a great job on Avery! I love her!

Great writing!

This is really well written. Very unique and insightful and not-contrived and...again I say, well written. Okay, obviously I can't write as good a review as you can a story, but you get my drift. You've characterized Avery in such a relatable manner in a short amount of time. Anyway, to make a long story short, I like the story a lot.

Pretty cool beginning, i like this girl, she's got edge. Although she's also got problems and all, she still keeps being who she wants to be, without caring about all those stupid things like popularity and looks. However, i really do hope she makes a few close friends like maybe one or two, ya know so than she won't have to deal all by herself. Well awesome start, hope you post your next chapter soon! Although "The Gravedigger's Daughter" does sound a tad bit scary and odd for a stories name, oh and i was wondering will the title have any major meaning? Just wondering...

Wah You've just gotta write good stories EVERYTIME, no? ; Hey, I'm not complaining. This story's very interesting so far I hope you will comtine this one and the Brainbasher soon Ganbatte

Not bad I guess. I'm sick of reading about cynical girls but since it was written by you and I loved your other stories, I decided to take a whack at it. And it *is* good. As always, you add in that extra, odd detail that makes everything more realistic. But you *do* know that it's impossible for every single girl (minus one) in a school to be bimbotic, don't you?

wow. your story has such an impact.. maybe im just emotional, but i cried a little on the first chapter.. it's so touching how much she loves alex, how she's so incredibly affected.. sigh.. it's a beautiful story/

This is really good! The dialogue is great, and I like your characters. Please continue.

this is an awesome story. it is sort of sad because i can relate to Avery, but I also think

that the second chapter was funny with your certain choice words for those snotty rich girls. lol...keep up the good work.

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