 who else 2002-10-24 . chapter 1 Bry!!!!! i luv this...this is so funny. oh and i like how you read it today, heh, funny pickin on amy. sometimes i think we do that too much but thien i think hey it's all in a lovin siterly sorta way right??? anywaz. iz kewl and for all of you who don't think it's kewl then well, the bottomless pit for you...*winks at bry* ya know what to do. laterz |
 Johnny Madcap 2002-10-23 . chapter 1*Blink*.... (long pause) *blink*
Um, good job, I guess... Man, this would be a lot more casual if the room I'm in typing wasn't COMPLETELY silent, I can almost hear crickets chirping. oO;;
Anyway, that was rather... interesting. The *writing* was good, but the *topic* seemed rather odd. Apart from one typo, the story was rather funny, if I do say so myself. The
"Yup, it spake."
"Amy... spake isn't a word." (tm)
was a nice touch. Good job (I guess).
-Fog |