I really like your idea. I don't know anything about MtG, but this story is really good!!

I want to read more!

So it's more like Magic the Gathering than I thought! I didn't know they spells and items were contained in cards (I really like that idea). Sounds like you have a great story planned! Update soon!

i reckon it sounds like a sorta adult pokemon'y thing with all the combining items with creatures. But i really like the idea of this and i wanna read more! Going to be waiting.

The prologue was good. I like the 'game'(it's like Magic the Gathering meats Pokemon..which is cool since i like both ^__^). I'm intrested...update soon!