this story was hilarious. i loved it.

it was lighthearted and the characters were adorable. Even Pleriel.lol.

to! cute! seriously. simple, funny, short, lovable. aw...

This was a lot of fun! it was an interesting and unique idea and i love every single character. the way its written with the little flashback notes is a really neat touch as well. this is definitaly going on my favorites list! Good job!

i shouldnt be staying up all night and reading fiction. but when i find such beautiful tales like this one i just cant help myself.

i love your writing. how its lighthearted, serious and friendly all at once. its like opening the windows and letting in some fresh air :)

d'aw. that was super cute. i love kyaj haha. some loop holes but i wouldve loved if you continued it with some twists or something. :p

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lol. wow.

SO.. SO FUNNY! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!! I was practically DEYING it was so funny! Can you write a sequel? PLease?
Bloodfeeder

WOW! Quite an interesting story...to say the least! I really liked it, though it was so odd lol. Very funny too :)
Great job!
~Brezzia

I know this story is kind of old and you apparently haven't logged-on to FictionPress in a while, but I thought I'd tell you that this is luverly :)

Hey I really enjoyed this story. It vaguely reminded me of 'Bartimaeus' from the Bartimaeus trilogy. Loved the sense of humour :)

That was a lot of fun ^_^ I enjoyed reading it :P

HA! Oh wow. Poor Dravin. Well, I'm sure it will end well...?

Haha, he's so dense! How he'll end up with Ryan is beyond me XD

Oh, my, this is gonna be fun :P

Ah, so that's her job! She's a spy ^^