A good end to the story. I like how you developed it from the begining and looking back, I can see how certain things then pointed to this. Good job, I'll be waiting for your next story.

Looks like I was sort of right, though I'm still waiting for the other foot to drop. But good job on the originality of your story. It's gone really well.

You definitely have me guessing as to what's going on here. I think he was working on some project that backfired (or was successful, depending on your point of view) and he's trapped inside of his mind. But, then again, I could be way off. Either way, I like this story.

Hm, quite interesting how things have changed. I have my suspicions but I'll wait and see how it plays out.

great storie! continue pls

This is a good read. It makes you think.

Ah, an interesting twist. This story is really evolving nicely. You've done a good job of keeping your readers in guard.

I couldn't wait, so I went to read at your website, and I just wanted to let you know:
I IMMENSELY ENJOYED YOUR 69 DEGREES!

Thank you for writing such an original story, at least, to me it was.

I am in awe.
Find yourself a publisher and get your work out there and do the world a favour, please.
Again, thanks!

Where are the other 12 Chapters?
We want more, we want more, we want more!

Oh, quite the cliff hanger. Awesome job on the story. I can't understand why it didn't get more reviews, it's excellent. Please update soon.

This guy and his erections.I'm really enjoying this story. I like how you've made it twilight zonish. Very good.

Ah! It's too bad I have to go to work, I wanna finish it. You've done a great job so far, this story is not only intruiging, but expertly written. I love your style and subtle humor.

I am intrigued.
Read the whole story.
I don't know what to say.
Do I have to?
I think I liked it!