Great idea but you need some help with the flow of rhyming. Cool idea though

bry...no, no bry, no. uh-uh. please, never again. more scarier than ode to sugar...though that wasn't really scary ok the dippin dots one well...hmmm well, ahhh, more scarier than Mr. R in a speedo *evil laugh* i know u got a great visual from that one. later *innocent smile*