Aww...I feel so sorry for Gwen... You really know how to inject emotion into a story; I can't seem to get the hang of it. In fact, I haven't written a story yet...*runs off to write; runs back quickly*Oh, and cool name! I thought I was unique when I started using this name 2 years ago, but then again, great minds think alike!*runs off to write again, and stays there!*

Iana S X

Loved the last lines once again. Very beautiful story, nearly brought me to tears. I really enjoyed reading it- it touched the ideas of a promise and the thoughts of a girl missing someone dear. I loved it, good job.

WWWAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! Is so sad!!! pls continue.
LaterDayz!!!!

cool.. lol update soon! its realli good!!

-jAyNe

Oh God... What are you trying to do? Makeus readers drown in our own tears!?

Wah..

You should continue! You really should!! You've got some gold-mining talent!!


Eto!


-lady pax










hehe ;)