I LOVE THIS STORY!! This is such a great story, I just love how much like an anime or manga this is, this is something I would expect to see on an anime channel after Tenchi Muyo cause this is a lot like it but is also very different. This is a really well done, original story and I can't find anything to ** about with this fic. GIVE ME THE NEXT CHAPTER!!

This is a great story, I love it!!

your story is the only one i've read on this site and i can tell you that it is really good. my favorite characters would have to be Kumiko and Ayame there pretty cool characters. hope you make a new chapter soon.

Yat great story! keep updating

Good one. I hate it when i lose my browser six times. Ugh...

*Gulps* This is so wrong...*Looks away*

Another nice capter, also like the small Romance between the two girls well. But did you mention this relationahip in the Summary? You can get Flames from that...Just warning you tthough

This story realy is stunningly written and funny too! Also watch the occasional mistakes you make with Grammar and Spelling(Tha hated words...)

For those who are wondering what _really_ happened after chapter 16 of this amazing fic, check out http://w.ammadeau.net for the ending!

For those who are wondering what _really_ happened after chapter 16 of this amazing fic, check out http://w.ammadeau.net for the ending!

For those who are wondering what _really_ happened after chapter 16 of this amazing fic, check out http://w.ammadeau.net for the ending!

For those who are wondering what _really_ happened after chapter 16 of this amazing fic, check out http://w.ammadeau.net for the ending!

Wow. A very interesting story, I must say! However, I do have a couple of problems...the Paranormal Club was the main conflict in this story, always behind the scenes, giving Ken and Kumiko a challenge...but now they're gone? Also, though the scenes between Ayame and Natsume are very well-written, they seem to drag on and become repititive. Oh no, Natsume accidentally touched Ayame. Again. Ayame spends an hour apologizing. Again. They don't seem to be going anywhere any time soon, and I suggest cutting these scenes a bit shorter, as they tend to get old. Your whole concept of Heaven and Hell is quite humorous in this story, and I mostly enjoyed it. One last gripe...there's not enough conflict in Ken and Kumiko's lives! Basically, Kumiko triumphs every time, and then they go through another sex parade or whatever...yeah. Anyways, enough with my ramblings, keep writing!

Very nice, loved the whole orange juice thing. Perhaps you could give my story a reveiw?

this story is undoubtedly the best written and most interesting story on this entire site. Please add more chapters soon.