Powerful. I'm currently doing a research project on the Vietnam War, and though it's not the same, tis not far from the pond. I studied WWI a few years ago, and this sounds like they fit together. Anyway, very powerful, and the slightly choppy style fits directly in with the sound of machiene gun fire. Good job.

Very moving. I've never been a soldier myself, but you paint a chillingly real picture of life (and death) on the battlefield. Gives you new respect for those that face this kind of hell every day. Excellently done.

Very nice. Good to see something that isn't a teenage love poem for a change. Love this and I loved your fic, "I Ain't Missing You At All". Hope you write some more stuff

Very touching. Nice, and I hope soldiers read this!...Do soilders go online to read stories though?..probably not...