Reviews for And Then You Said Goodbye

Melody Brandybuck 2002-12-14 ch 1,	That's beautiful. I especially liked the way you switched from third to first person. It fit the poem exactly. I've never personally experienced this, but I know how it feels to have a friend move away, and you expressed that perfectly. ~Melody
Wrong Name Tag 2002-11-28 ch 1,	I like how you switched to first person in the last few lines. Awesome poem. My favourite lines were "Not close enough to tell Too far away to hold" Awesome job -Jessie
Nhalida 2002-11-08 ch 1,	That is so sad, oh my gosh, feel like I am about to cry. I like how you changed to the 'I' at the end. This is such a great poem. Do you have any poems, you would like me to read (the ones you like best, or think are your best)? Keep writing! Nhalida (Gnat)
the Queen of Jupiter 2002-11-08 ch 1,	It's nice, but I think it ended too abruptly. I would've loved to see some more to this. Keep writing! Peace ~~>
SweetGrape 2002-11-06 ch 1,	Awww- sad, sweet and heartfelt. Tells the whole story with a final tear at the end.
Carter Tachikawa 2002-11-06 ch 1,	Very sad this time. But it's still good. Keep it up.~CT
HobbitGirl814 2002-11-01 ch 1,	Awwww Kacie. This is so sad and sweet! I love it. Is the two people in this poem who I think they are? God Bless, ~Sam~