Good, but it seems like Riley can do just about anything. The Britney Spears part was kind of weird, but good effort.

the plot was really good but it was kind of unbelievable...no one would forgive that quickly...the characters seem a little unrealistic...overall it was pretty good

Pretty good. Liked te idea and all. The characters were pretty good. BUt I don't think that Kylie was in their enough. Also, the Britney Spears angle was kind of weird. Still pretty good. YOu should consider a sequel

ok, u have GOT to do a sequal! like, after their honeymoon and u know, life in the palca? That would be awesome! Oh, and great story!

Hey guys, it's the author, Apolla, here.

I wanted to thank you all for your reviews.

Also, I just wanted to say that I know this story is very fluffy, but, well, I wrote it during summer vacation, when I'm much more relaxed. It was just a fun thing I decided to do.

Anyway, I've started a new story, called What A Year. I promise, this one will not be all fluff! I'm really trying to make it realistic.so check it out and let me know what you think! I've just posted the first chapter as of now, 6:50 P.M. on March 3, 2003.

~Apolla

AND she always gets the guy! How old is she? What. 17? Nobody gets married that young, unless there are other reasons. And wouldn't it have been better if you'd make up new people instead of using people that actually exist? Prince William, Britney Spears. Once again, this ISN'T A FLAME.

Okay, sorry, this may seem like a flame, but I only mean to express some constructive critism. You see, Riley is too perfect. She can sing, dance, speak so many languages, she's gorgeous, everything turns out fine in her life, the only tragic flaw you have for her is her temper. and that's not only solved easily, it's also not very frequent.

Britney Spears? Okay, this is your story so you can do whatever you want. but BRITNEY SPEARS?? I just want to say this story is getting less and less realistic. The thing is, after her adopted parents died, that was the closest thing you got to a crisis. And that was at the BEGINNING, how do you expect to keep this interesting if you can't have a climax because the crisis was at the beginning?

Good story so far.

Wow.. the perfect fairy tale for Riley..
That was good..

Charmie

hey.. just wanted to tell u that u did a great job with the story.. u should write a sequel to it. hope u keep writing.. ur great at it..

Aw! i love this story! your a really great writer! update soon!

hey hey! great story! i was kinda dissapointed it didnt go further! but update soon!

Hey, i love your story (sorry i didn't review earlier)Pooh! you're not updating, and I wan't to read more. Now WRITE!

If this story plot weren't so good I wouldn't be reading this. Try to space out the paragraphs to make it easier to read. This idea is so good! Just expand on it and your story would be excellent. Keep up the work ^_^