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| Chloe Caralee 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI hope you update b/c I'm def. confused with this chapter. |
| MyWordsLover 2006-07-02 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease continue! I like it alot! It has the possibility to not be as typical or cliche as 99% of the stories on Fictionpress! (That's AWESOME!) |
| Specularia 2003-10-03 ch 1, | abuseReally intersting and twisted.I likead the poem at the end. |
| Edana 2003-08-27 ch 1, | abuseTwisted little minds are great if they come up with stuff like this ^_~ That was an interesting first chapter, you definetely asked a lot of questions and now I'm curious as to what is going on! The girl's dreams have got to be prophetic, haven't they? I also liked the poem at the end; it was well written and gives me an idea of what this story's gonna be like. Anyway, update!! |
| IPOR 2003-04-05 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. Hope you do continue! |
| Lady Serpentine 2002-10-26 ch 1, | abuseGah! I'd like to see this continued, I really would :) elves are so damn cool. |