I am in complete awe. Before reading your story "Fallen", I decided to read a sample of your writing to decide if it was worth reading... and it is SO worth it.

You pulled off the first person POV to perfection. It was deep, immersive, full of character, and no case of seeing-stuff-that-I-shouldn't-be-seeing-unless-a-walk-around-with-a-mirror.

Your characters' relationship in itself is sublime. I almost felt like dancing myself as I was reading about their first encounter (but I'm sharing an apartment with seven other people right now, so no).

AH! It was beautiful! Everthing! I am in COMPLETE AND UTTER AWE!

Wow, this is prime example of beautiful writting! This is an awesome vampire story.

wow! o_o i loved how you described everything. I want to be like you when i grow up.

wow! this was great! i really liked it!

: )

DH

boh are just so beautiful. the writing brings it onto a completely different level the lines: "Strange. The colours seemed to fade when he was gone." & "And I guess that not all flowers bleed" -just amazingly put and just a wonderful way to end both chapters. they hit the heart really, make something as outlandish as this real and bring it to life. this is truly wonderful. very, very beautiful.

~* noelle*adds this to favorites

Divine. Nothing more to it, than divine.

OO It's very pretty. An excellent/vivid writtin' style ^^

I love your use of color and temperature. Wow, anyway, I wish you would write more with this.

Ooh, I -really- like it.

You did quite well, I am still left in awe at this. Being a vampire fanatic I was intrugued by the summery. Just by reading that I got trapped into this. Its as though you have woven a spell that captivates the reader into reading this. Well done on this! Keep up the good work! ^_^

!~* Noelle *~!

wow, when centi sait to read your stories im VERY glad i listened! this was so, i dont know beautiful, for lack of a better word! i love it that the vampire feels his loss of life and then regains it in a full circle ending almost, with the white rose that his love gave him, so like the ones his creator, or destroyer left him in. the title is a very good one, radiating symbolism through the shared emptiness, but i love the fact that they fill eachother in the end, his saddness forever gone along with his lover's innocence. very discriptive and extremely love filled. its a wonderfully inventive story that i am quite fond of! kudos!! *claps*

*blinks tears away* So so so beautiful. I do hope that you are published. A talent like yours should not go to waste. I loved the symbolism in this.

Your writing is...breathtaking. Literally. It was so otherworldly. I love it, the story AND your writing.

wowzers...that was truly beautiful. it was so sweet and full with emotions.
in other words i loved it
:o)

;_; *speechless* As my friends would say: "Holy **! You made Gaki cry!" I bow to your greatness...