Wow...that was a nice, deep poem, not like some of that flowery stuff I see a lot. I can see that being a song, too :)

Good writing!
Atarikono

Once again excellent. Good use of rhyme, although it doesn't flow quite as well as some of your other poems.

That was so good and heartfelt, and I can soooo totally relate to the whole forbidden love thing, and what a double edged swore it is. Congrats

Oh man... I TOTALLY relate to this!!! This is EXACTLY how I feel about this one ** jerk that I really like... lol. Please write more! Its amazing how much you can find out how other people feel and how you feel through poetry.