Oh...this is too sad. I think I'd like to spread your message here. If it's alright with you, could I possibly show this to a few of my teachers? They'd probably be able to help spread the message. I'll be sure to directly quote you, as well.

Beautiful and sad.

that was sad. Stuff like that actually happens and thats why it touched me so much

That's sad...but that's what happens too often. I enjoyed reading your poem, even though it made me a little sad. Thank you for posting.

Tsk, tsk, tsk. Well. that was sad. The poor girl. Ah, but that puts the man in the middle in a spot. But he could have done something! Yell at the deadbeat dad!! Feh.

Well, you write good poetry regardless. Quite emotional. good poetry is always like that.

No. Worst part is it happends all the time.

Sad... worst part is, it could happen.

Well that was different but i liked it! by the way i never did read taming Of the sherw, shaksbeer(i have no clue how to spell his name)i hear it is very funny. ya but about the pome you wrote it was very good but kinda repetive c ya
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Sad... I think... in any case it's good ^.^