nice. i like the little bit at the end, its something that you really don't expect!

um..great way of describing life?

yiyashani, thanks for reviewing my fic MRL. I decided to try something different for a change and read a poem. Incredibly peace inspiring. It made me long for summer and the beach again. Aie, I'm sick of this winter. I loved your ending, totally unexpected, nice twist towards humor.

great poem! i like it! very good imagery! poor horse. hmm, well, good job on this! keep writing!

Very pretty in the beginning. The ending.I dunno (I said the word!) but it made me laugh.

or you could have called it 'typical' or 'murphy's law'. i had a murphy's law day today, actually. anyrate, offtrack again. it really was good and i had to smile at the end.
btw, thanx for the review, even though it was one of my lousy poems. I think the feeling may have been quesiness :). peace, luv and killer rubber duckies,