hm...wish i could dance through life. that would be nice...

excellent. i don't really know how to review poetry, but this is good stuff! can't describe how you feel after reading it...can't describe anything. blargh. you're good at this!

::goes away before she causes anymore confusion::

Absolutely gorgeous, but a bit haunting as well. I don't know what else to say, as I'm not much good at reviewing poems unless I have something to (constructively) criticize, which isn't the case this time. Well, keep writing!

Brit: I dont like non-ryming poems, but I like this one _!

Kristi: Ditto on that.

It is really good...I thought of Johnny too!

:: wipes tear ::

that was perfect!

I' . I can see why this is one of your fav poems.

Sal

Hi, Marley! ::waves to Marley, who is sitting right next to her:: ( ::Marley waves back:: ) This is a cool poem! _ Yay! Very dream-ish... and ev'ryone knows we love that stuff! ::dance:: I like the knife-y part. ::hugs Nny comics:: ( ::Marley screams:: ) Yeah. Dreams are cool. Let's dream every night! :D But nightmares make good story ideas. O.o;; Mmkay. Buh-bye!

Raven

Awesome!I love it!It beats your other two poems even(I say that every time but it's true!Each poem is better than the one preceading it!).Hmph!How come you never showed them to me before?You evil being!Withholding wonderful poetry from unsuspecting personages!Well anyway...

*catches breath*keep writing!(or you could say versing...hm...now that I think about it that sounds better!)

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