That is short but incredibly cool. The double meanings are jumping out at me, I love it. It's so well thought out, how the second stanza could be taken all alone, without the knowledge of any comparison with seasons...and it's true.

Leaves are their fullest. All leaves must fall, though the trees can remain. To survive the cold, trees must be strong. New life comes from those who survive. It works perfectly. I think this has to be my favorite piece you've done so far. Short and inspiring...you just accomplished one of the toughest types of writing that there is. Nice job. ^_^

OMG! wow... I love that look on it... this is so clever!

Whoa... This is really cool!
I love the way everything fits together!
Great poem!

O.I like this.like really like.it's so strong and powerful.I have to admit.Autumn is my favoritest (is that a word?) season of all.does that mean I'm reasonable? ^^ oh well.nice poem, I liked it.

Cat

That's good

This is a really good poem...you're right about our names, though...guess we think alike!

I really liked this, it sounds almost like a prophecy. It really has several layers of meaning to it. It reminded me of the process of writing a story. I loved it. Thanks for reviewing me. Jack and the invisible are two different people, and I guess I did just jump into the story. Trying to do a in media res sort of thing. Anyway, I'm trying to make it a bit clearer. ;)

OOoooooh deep and meaningfulness...
YAY!
~Christina

Whoa... that's craziness. I like it. Lesseee here, what have I to say, not much, except that I have to make crepes! Yay Frnech! ::cough:: I'm so hyper right now, please forgive me. Once again, beautiful.
~Toireasa

Hey...that was really cool! I would have never thought of the seasons like that.

Nice work, and thanks for the reviews.

Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw

What's Windsong? I really like the last verse; it sounds like something out of a novel, heavily prophetic and bloated with ambiguity! Wow, that was mean of me. *bows* A thousand apologies. It's really good! Also, I have to thank you for reviewing ALL of "Kiy" (wow! I don't know how you can stomach the original sections - I WINCE whenever I look at them! ~_~ ...Though I am writing more. *sweatdrop* It WILL be longer, I promise!), "Disruptions," (yes, it is a bit like X-men, isn't it? Whoops! *blush*), "Maren," "Death's Scythe," and "Artist of Life." I'm glad you like my writing, and it's a real pleasure to read your work.

WOA deep I love the ending really good I like it a lot keep writing laters!!!

~Dark
PLUR (Peace, Love, Unity, and Respect)

You are a genius, none of your poems are as deep as this or as awe inspiring. This is the tyoe of poem that leaves you feeling less whole after reading it, because of the things you make the reader think.

Oh, that's just beautiful! I love how you make it short and sweet and to the point... I can't do that. My life is dramatic. Or rather, it's just too slow. You know? Anyway, I loved it! Adored it! Please keep writing, and thanks for reviewing my work! ;-)

Beautiful poem. I liked it a lot. Btw, thanks for the review. I know, the foreshadowing seems rushed but I MADE it that way. This is NOT a long story, that's why. And lately, people complained I'm not clear on characterization, which is why I answered back. But I do appreciate your criticism.

Anyway, back to this. Nice poem once again. Short but nice. Keep on writing.

~CT