Aack! What happens next? Hurry up and write more! It was good and I liked it. By the way, I like you pen name too. VERY much so.

i just read all of this, it's great!you've got the emotion down so well. a really brill idea, too:D

Hrm... very well done for the start of this story. You've got me intrigued-I'd like to see what happens with Jo and Clair. Your writing style is good-clear and concise, to the point. Hope to see more soon.