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| Gayahithwen 2006-05-15 ch 32,   | I adore this story. Elwyn and Nightshade are so wonderful together, and I'm really curious about how it all will work out. Of course we've seen occasional glimpses of it in your other stories, but... wah. Please continue! |
| hartzcandi 2004-11-26 ch 32, | ok lovin the story but why does it cut off like this r u ever goin finish this |
| Aemilia 2004-08-30 ch 30, | I don't know if you consider this finished or what, but you do kind of leave me hanging there. I want to know more of what happens. Do they ever sleep together, or will this be a strictly platonic relationship forever? -Aemilia |
| DeathsDragon 2004-04-12 ch 32, | wow! I'm just loving this story, it total rules. Please keep up with the updates! ^_^ I love the way your slowly breaking down the barriers and not rushing it like some. (e.g me)n_n Lilith B |
| Traixen 2003-10-08 ch 32, | *Drags your sorry butt back over to HLL* Write, boy! Wtite! *Glares evilly until the next chapter is up.* ^_~ |
| storyshadow 2003-08-15 ch 32, | No more? *cries* WHy? Why? Don't stop, you must write more! |
| Frozen Darkness 2003-07-31 ch 32, | Shinny Chapter. ^.* I can't wait for the next one!! Bai bai ja ne 0.o Darkness |
| Daphne 2003-07-08 ch 1, | I'm not going to barrage you with compliments; I'm sure you know what an amazing and prolific writer you are. But Woman, YOU NEED TO FINISH THIS STORY! I'm itching in my sleep to see what happens to these two. I also love the rest of your work, I've got to admire your rich imagination- Keep up the good work- Daphne |
| Peachez 24 2003-06-26 ch 32, | Wow. This is great. I absolutely love it! I read Misbegotten and loved it, so I decided to try to see things from Elwyn's point of view. He seemed like a guy who had it rough, and I guess I was right. I think it worked... you asked if it was evident that Elwyn was more emotional around Donovan, and it is. This is seriously amazing although it is cruel. It's almost been a month since you updated! I know I didn't read it then, but I hope you do continue soon. I'm really into this. I mean the characters and their surroundings are real enough within my mind that they could be flesh, blood and really there. It's amazing the way you use your words to fit them so perfectly. Well, I should stop babbling. Awesome story!! Keep writing! Peachez ^_~ |
| Midian Dawn 2003-06-26 ch 32, | wow that is so great. And the fact that Elwyn is growing a little closer to her without admitting it is sweet too. |
| Lucy Hawthorne 2003-06-01 ch 32, | aw, it's a Norman Rockwell moment. :o) I don't think you skipped ahead too much and I like how you're keeping things moving. You have a bit of typos, but that's no big deal, nothing to worry about. |
| maliska 2003-06-01 ch 32, | i lyke da direction, but is there going to be a romance or anything between them? juss askin... but good job so far... |
| maliska 2003-05-31 ch 29, | whew, took me a while to finish reading 29 chapters... well i lyke the story so far, but i agree with you, that it's getting...not boring, but kinda the same. "something needs to happen, and it needs to happen now." i fergot where i heard that but yah... |
| coonie 2003-05-30 ch 29, | There is no way this could be boring. I am totally hooked. Please update. :) |
| Lucy Hawthorne 2003-05-25 ch 29, | Elwyn exhausts me. lol, why can't he just get over it all? gr...don't worry, you're doing a good job keeping the story up, you may want to start moving along a little faster, but other than that it's fine. |