   teiwaz 2006-05-26 . chapter 1Wow. That's most certainly not what I was expecting... very well written! |
 AgtBauer24 2005-06-08 . chapter 1One word -> WOW! Man, this story is pure scary. I love the ending, so freaky that the people don't even know it's a real person on display. Great job. |
 MG Pitz 2005-06-02 . chapter 1Coolioso |
 tissy-f-tis 2005-04-02 . chapter 1wow, really took my heart away from me... |
 Florescent_Blue 2005-02-21 . chapter 1 Huh. That was pretty cool. Very nice irony at the end with the haunted house and all "Even the blood looks real." Creepy! (p.s. I love your FBI fics) |
| SisterBear 2003-08-15 . chapter 1 Oh wow... That was creepy... It was very good... Just creepy... |
 hudsiyfiusnfsudi 2002-10-28 . chapter 1whoa, wow, cool, awsome.....great story. |
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