wow, deliciously angsty and very dark and violent. that makes god poetry there! lol. it was good, i enjoyed it, i can kinda relate. ^.^

sanity is such a unvalued thing.very brutal poem i love it.and i must say somehow between your tormented poetry my music and half a bottle of advil i have over come my writers block. find a link to my page and check out what uve created. 'feel the gush' is all i have to show forthis weeks torment.

~Nat The Unchanging Darkness,Keeper of light ~

Yeah! Death to all those stupid cheerleaders!Oh no I broke a nail...

This poem can go either way goth or whatever the opposite of goth maybe. Or maybe, it's just my goth side evolving. I'm not goth...yet.

It's solid. It's damn good. And as many times as I've read it. I'm sure to remember it...word for word.

I love the line "You're so beautiful, I need you to ** die. Because I love you so much, you're the reason I cry."

This poem just overall appeals to me. Keep writing and submitting your stuff.