Very deep.. I still dont fully understand it though.. Even so, I really enjoyed readin it.. I cant explain, but it was good, real good..

That's some deep poetry. A pretty logical theory though, from how I see it.

Nice job. Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw

i love your work- this one is exceptional. i can't believe you're thirteen- ur theories are so mature!! not to mention your vocabulary. but i loved the example u gave in the first stanza- of how women pray for their sons to com back from war- it's a touching example and defines your theories perfectly.

So there are alternate realities out there, with different realities and different hopes and dreams, and someday, when entropy starts catching up to us all, all of the worlds will merge into one? That's a pretty neat concept, and rather reminds me of a new novel by Diane Duane (author of "So You Want To Be A Wizard") entitled, "Stealing the Elf-King's Roses." Very cool book, and your poem rather reminded me of it - but I'm not saying it sounds copied in any way!

Hey, thanks again for a great review :) It's always funny for me to go back through my stories and see how the writing gets better as the story moves along - proof that experience is the best teacher.

I really enjoyed this piece. It makes me want to write. Almost sounds like a famous speech... It's very thought-provoking.

Ok. Now I'll ask you. Do you believe in magic? Because it almost seemes like what you write is about it. Do you just write what you feel like, or something that you seem to rememeber from long ago? Because it's beautiful, the way you write. It makes me feel like I'm flying on silver wings amongst the stars....

I'm not quite sure what it means... but it's true, I think. This is rather random, but... wait, I'll ask by annon. so that you can erase it. I'll sign it as Kiayla. Great! In a bit!

O.O...Wow...that was good...*claps*

Very nice. I like this one. My only problem would be is that some of your lines are too long and they can be shortened. But overall, it's good.

And on the subject of "Pandora's Shadows"-don't worry, I *will* dive more into everyone else's lives soon. Eight main characters is going to take me time, you realize. Take care and keep on writing.

~CT

Whoa...just whoa. I have some thoughts like that....mostly the reality thing...kinda ^_^; heh, anyway I liked this poem too, well written, reminds me of stuff I thought of once ^_^

Deep - very deep! It moved me!