 Neko-Mun 2003-03-13 . chapter 1 this is SO good...i love the description! Im working on my stories. I'm not too good though =/ but I try =D. I like your poem n stuff too (didn't review on those though). Well, g2g. Bye! |
 Aisling Grey 2003-02-16 . chapter 1I don't think this story is weird at all, I think it's very insightful, thought provoking piece of work. And as for your personification--it's great! Very well done! |
 Naja Copperleaf 2003-01-20 . chapter 1This was really well executed, but I think that mother nature created the cycle of life and the interdependence of all creatures herself. The character's suprise when she discovered some of the other animals and their role in life led me to believe that she should be a more innocent being. Anyway, it was very well written. ;) |
 Andrea 2003-01-19 . chapter 1 wow. this is raw and emotional like nothing i have read in a long time it made me cry. you are really gifted i mean it!!! you seem like you might like lord of the rings i wonder do you read the books or see the movies? because you should write some stories about aragorn and legolas you are so good at this and it would be great fanfiction. i would read it all the time you are amazing. thank you!!!!!!!!! |
 Auroreia 2003-01-01 . chapter 1So that's technically "god"? I can live with that. If anything did create us (not saying something didn't [look! bad grammer!]) it probrably feels the same way. Everyone on this planet's killed something and when you think about it it's really sad. If it's smart makes reasons for killing come out of emotion if it's not it kills to live. I liked it though, it's a good story, could teach people something. Course just because the answer's willing to be given doesn't mean the one that asked will get the answer. |
 Val Mora 2002-11-24 . chapter 1I would comment that trees aren't sentient, but I don't think it would matter. This is really dark, and although it sits badly with me (I'm not real fond of this kind of the-Earth-and-everything-on-it-is-corrupted-and-evil theme), it's a good illustration of how to pull it off well. It may not be my favorite, but it was well-executed.
Thanks for your review of "The Court of Swords"! You aren't THAT tough on my stories; at least you weren't like one of my friends, who read something I wrote a year or two ago and said, "I hate it. It sucks," or something similar. Made me cry. *sigh* I was pathetic, but I was proud of it. The work, I mean. At least you give reasons for improvement! The best kinds of reviews are the ones that only want you to get better,and want to help you on your way there. Anyway, thanks for the def of "Windsong"! |
 Aradia Madrea-Nox 2002-11-16 . chapter 1Oh, that's so... sad! And true! You are very good at Windsongs? Oh, may I please ask what is the reasoning behind the name of 'Windsongs'? Because I've never heard that word before.... |
 Carter Tachikawa 2002-11-10 . chapter 1A very nice story. I don't know how it's a fable but it's a nice story. Keep writing and thanks for the reviews.~CT |
 Teeto 2002-11-09 . chapter 1Oh my gosh....This is incredible, and marvelous, and...there's so many other words for it! Get it published, girl! I mean it! |