Beautiful job! I like the words, and the way it flows. Please tell me you set this to some music?

Laterz
Gothic Rogue

This sounds like it would work well in a Songfic. It's soulful enough to blend in nicely with a dramatic nararrative.

Speaking of songs, I took your suggestion to parody Avril Livigne's "Complicated". I'm done, and it should be up at some point.

yeah, i read the fanfcik where you used it. cool song. sigh, i love my new backround! ^_^ i will have to print it out and show you!

We've all been there, Bubbles... You said it well.