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| Penumbra 2003-03-21 ch 1,   | Interesting play on such a well known cliche. I wonder that question too. |
| Werecat99 2003-01-26 ch 1, | Simple, and yet brilliant. I loved it! |
| Hopes Forgotten 2003-01-25 ch 1, | Wow... very well written. |
| clifjumpr13 2003-01-18 ch 1, | I like this. The repitition is great, and I like the way you ended on a question, rather than with the line 'I am me.' I've seen a few along these lines, or at least with similar endings, but they stopped there, instead of going on, and I think the question leaves it more up in the air, and makes it much deeper. |
| Melody Brandybuck 2002-12-14 ch 1, | Nice poem, made me think. Very good way of expressing confusion. I feel the same way - I am what I am, and sometimes even I don't understand me. Very well written. ~Melody |
| Wrong Name Tag 2002-11-28 ch 1, | Really makes you think, and very interestingly written. Great job -Jessie |
| midnight dreams 2002-11-22 ch 1, | very...very good. |
| Angel Nazi 2002-11-16 ch 1, | kool pome i think it was different but good different! loved it Angel Nazi ^_^ btw i like you name |
| Moonwinges 2002-11-15 ch 1, | Hmm, confusing but good. At times it seems you are threatening, other times you are pleading. The entire poem is centered around confusion, but in a good way. The only problem is that it never does answer the question "What am I?". ^_^ Still, it is very good. |
| Silent Dreamer 2002-11-12 ch 1, | good poem i like it loads. when people ask me what i am i tell them that i am me! |
| SquallLeonheart 2002-11-10 ch 1, | Nice poem |
| Nhalida 2002-11-08 ch 1, | This is a really cool poem, but what is it? Keep up the good work. Nhalida (Gnat) |
| Carter Tachikawa 2002-11-06 ch 1, | Makes you think a lot...good job.~CT |
| thunderwitch 2002-11-05 ch 1, | Great poem. Really nice flow. I don't know why I thought of this, but, basically, there is no normal person. I just interpreted that out of this poem. and, if there is a normal, I'm sure not! Keep writing! |
| Black Rose4 2002-11-04 ch 1, | Ooh...that was really cool. I love it..good job! I read your happy poem...and I must say...I SUCK at writing happy stuff...it's just not me...not a lot of us I'm guessing. ~BR |