 Wrong Name Tag 2002-11-02 . chapter 1Short and simple, but nicely written. Something I can relate to, though I don't really hate my friend, more the fact that I know our friendship is over at the moment. Anyway, nicely put poem, and keep it up
-Jessie |
 Stoffpferd 2002-11-01 . chapter 1Well, I also had to find out that a close friend of mine only used me and didn't really care at all...but...after all, I can't really say that I HATE her...it makes me feel blue and pains me to no end, but I just can't forget the happy days I lived with her. Sorry, but your poem makes me think about it again and again...great job, I really know how you feel!!! |
 DefianceIsMe 2002-10-29 . chapter 1Cool! I appriciate reviews too....Well the poem shows a lot of emotion especially anger. I thought it was wonderful. ^_^ |
 Tim 2002-10-29 . chapter 1Heartfelt, though the 'mind' and 'kind' rhyme was a bit too obvious. Don't hate your friend. |
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