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Reviews For: High School

Ice Dagger 2006-04-25 ch 1,	abuseUm, I'm a little confused. You call her Sarah, then Dan calls her Holy (which is cute, but maybe a little confusing if she doesn't question it), and then you refer to her as Holy before she says "That's horrible!" Near the end. You might want to make that a little clearer. Also, when she reaches out to touch him, you said "are" and I think you meant "arm". There are a few minor grammatical errors, but the descriptions are nice and the plot flows smoothly. Well written, over all.
jhoudiey 2004-02-29 ch 5, anon.	abusei really loved your story and i was wondering when you get the next part out, can you email it too me? and also, since you write (obviously) i was wondering if you would like to read my origonal fiction. only 1 of my friends has gotten through it, then again, only 1 likes to read, so basically i would like your opinion of it, email me back:)
Chavi West-Wind 2003-02-07 ch 4,	abuseooooooooh..... saaaaaaaaaad.... T_T write more pwease... btw, u spelled Sadness wrong.. Kitty cat demons, =^.^= Cat
Jadie 2003-02-03 ch 3,	abuseHoly's dad killed Daniel's dad, and Daniel's dad killed Holy's mom. Evilness. ::chuckles evilly:: Omea o korosu. And Meoro Meoro. Meoracha! sp?::is being evil:: I just watched Dilandau-sama. The most wonderfullest evilness of all. Okay I'll stop rambling.
Jadie 2003-02-03 ch 2,	abuse:: is very confused:: Teacher took the ladder away? But.... that doesn't make sense. What ladder where are they?
Jadie 2003-02-03 ch 1,	abuseOh coolies. If your not Holy Star then I'll be her. Nah.. Cool story.
crazipeach 2003-01-26 ch 3, anon.	abuseAaaaah! tellmetellmetellmetellme!!!! hghmm. sorry. What the hell happened? Weird. Very cool though. Just wondering, if he isn't imbarressed to let her ball her eyes out into his chest why so much after. Though I can see that maybe it's just because it's sort of a thing where they understand each other, while after, it was all he could do not to run away in imbarressment afterwards. Anyway, like it very much.
Jay 2003-01-26 ch 3, anon.	abuseYou are a bad lady. How could you make their parents die? pouts Go on with the story so I can find out what happens!
Chavi West-Wind 2003-01-11 ch 2,	abuseooh.... cute!!! yay!!! runs around screaming incoherently it's sooo coolies! me like me like me hyper! yay!!!!!!!!! runs off screen =^.^=
Jay 2003-01-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseMesa like it! ^^ WRITE MORE!!
liney (silver dagger) 2002-12-07 ch 1, anon.	abusehey again! im glad to hear ur moving? will u be closer to cat? well this story is really good!...the reason im not putting xellos in my story is cause i have never watched slayers so its hard. cya soon! liney
Chikemuri 2002-12-05 ch 1,	abusei like the name...and Daniel sounds HOT!!! ^_^; heehee....did i miss something? i can't seem to figure out what age they are....i think i missed something...oh well!!! AND WHAT'S WRONG WITH CHORUS?! HUH?! HUH?! ok i'll go away now...UNTIL I FINISH READING UR OTHER FICS!!! heeheehee....
Cat 2002-11-24 ch 1, anon.	abusebtw, why'd u steal Jenna's name? that's mean...oh well!! u might've gotten it from somewhere else!!! Jenna: nuh uh, she stole it from me u have no proof. anyways, i still like it...when in the world are u gonna update?! if u can't update, try to at least type it, save it on a disk or something, and email it to me!!! if u told me ur password i could post it for u!!! ...wait, i just realized that if u have time to type it, u'd have time to post it. ok so that's really not necessary but...it's the thought that counts right?
Dark-Warrior-of-Shadows 2002-10-30 ch 1,	abusehee hee.....y'know u should change da rating to Pg-13 cuz o the cussing....but it is realllllllly good! I like it!btw im Chavi West-wind's lil bro!! thank her im here!!!
Chavi West-Wind 2002-10-30 ch 1,	abusecoolies! update reeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaallllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyy soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ididlikeit! ididlikeit! (teehee ^.~) =^.^=Cat

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