A most interesting story concept... I like the way the main character is developed. In my novel, In The Eyes Of God, the main character awakens on a strange planet with no clue what happened and how. Mind checking it out? There's already two out of four books done.

Excellent! Please, I hope you are writing chapter 3. Don't forget to R&R mine. Keep up the writing

Very interesting, keep up the writing. I like where you're going. Please R&R my story. I have 7 chapters so don't freak out when you read chptr 1 and it's boring, please read the other chapters aswell. Please. Also, going to chapter 2 now, it's got me! Keep it up!