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| strawberry-toast 2005-11-26 ch 1,  | abusethank you. |
| Watch Me 2005-09-21 ch 1, | abuseThat's amazing ... I've never understood how people can possibly hate love. Love is love, no matter what! It's a touching fiction, yet also serves up a slap in the face. Transgendered people aren't seen as they should be ... they are simply "gender confused." As a transgendered man, the sadness is overwhelming. -sigh- Nicely written, though. |
| PixieKitn 2004-12-04 ch 1, | abuseThis story was so sad, so beautiful, so EVOCATIVE. It made me feel in a way few of my own stories have. I only hope my own stuff can reach this level of honest feeling. I share your pain at the way people can treat those they don't understand, I've faced my own discrimination, as so many of us have. Anyway, great writing, keep it up, that way I have an example of how good I hope to become. ^.^ |
| Naomi Schemer 2004-08-02 ch 1, | abusethis is so sweet. when i started reading this i just felt so sad, but later when he became more hopeful i became more hopeful and it made me smle. i really like this story. -Naomi |
| Ilana 2004-06-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was soo sad! |
| IceAngelDarkMoon 2004-01-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautiful, and so touching. I can feel the emotion in it, which always makes a story so much more than that. I'd say sorry to you as most poeple do for those close to a person who died, but sorry has yet to fix anything, and there is no way I could have helped, so instead I say I hope for you, for another person to be so important to you, and for others to become more understnding of things and people that are differnt. This was a tragic but true story that really makes poeple think. Keep writing!! Ice |
| Lina Inverse 2003-05-26 ch 1, | abuseTell me this isn't a true story. It's bad enough to read about hate crimes in the newspaper, but to actually experience them... |
| Rochelle 2002-11-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was beautiful. Really. I attended a candlelight vigil for Gwen, but was surprised at how few people showed up. I'm glad to have read this story, because it lets me know that people do care. |
| markie 2002-10-30 ch 1, anon. | abusevery deep and yet so real. i think it's outstanding chey |
| ziggy pop eno 2002-10-30 ch 1, | abusevery bittersweet, very good. I liked that a lot, it makes you think, and it makes you look at people in a diffrent way. good job. |
| Jenqo 2002-10-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is very nice |