Great chapter, as always. I was wondering when Diane would come back into the picture. I really like the last line... very honest. Please update soon!

Took me the best part of 5 hours to read, but I did it and I love it, so...

Loren really is just a cold-hearted bitch, huh? And to think, you even made me like Trina...

Ohmigod, what is she doing back here? Nice twist...now I'm more confused than before! (that means I like it!)

I'm so glad you updated! *does happy update dance*

Wonderful chapter. As if I expected anything less, from you.

Woah...I'm in shock...such story development!

Anje sure does pick 'em! People keep cheating on her and then blaming it on her!

Anyway, some of it sounded very familiar :-) You really seem to be going into the characters far deeper than before and I'm getting a much clearer idea of why they're doing things. One thing I especially liked was the way the tone changed, from when they were cold and hostile towards one another at the start, to the warmer sympathetic empathy at the end. It was seamless and very believable, and also mirrored the way I felt about them both.

Sorry to go on, but it's better than, 'I don't get it', isn't it?

This was a great chapter. Seriously, one of my favorite in this entire story. The way you write dialogue is incredible, it's so meaningful and realistic. I used to like Trina and Anje together, but now... Loren and Trina really are cute. I think that Anje's destined to be alone (especially considering that last line). Please update soon!

Awesome. I'm glad you did some stuff with more of Loren and Trina's POV. I never did think they were as evil as a lot of your other reviewers do. I like how you made then more...human-ish.

awsome chapter, really very good, one of the best ones in this story in my opinion at least. I'll say it again, I really like Trina. Anyways, get the next one up quick.

wicked story

...wow...that was impressive... _

What do they want exactly? ARGH! They're not the only ones crazy, they're driving ME crazy as well...

you're right...they are crazy. Nobody knows what he hell they want in this story! But that's what keeps me reading!

I felt a strange twinge of happiness when they got back together... I don't know how that happened :-)

It actually got pretty... I want to say naked, but I just know you'll use it against me later. What I mean is that everything, all the words, the lies and the rationalisation seemed to strip away. I truly thought someone was going to jump for a minute, they both seemed so vulnerable. And I'm babbling, which is a sure sign that it affected me.

i missed dropping reviews, for some reason...

so here.

just wanted to say, daddy, that jewel's "foolish games" was aptly playing in the background as i was reading this.

oh yes, crazy like that. people... *shakes head*