Great discription! It's GREAT! the ending isn't THAT bad- jus' nice and happy and fluffy and non-violent and MEish.^^ It's good. Keep writting my dear friend!

Sounds like the evil little Tailypo. Except in your version, it's just misunderstood. Which is nice, for a change. Not strange at all. Or at least, not to me. Nicely written, too.

you're right, the ending sucks. but... KITTYYYYYYYYYY!!! ok, I'll shut up now.

Very good. I like it!

"Odd," hmmm? Well, your friend isn't the only one to every say so ^^;;

Anyway, I'm going to check out your other stories now. This is great!

We had to do that assignment too, except write the whole story. I got an A+...

Definitly wierd, but very very good.Creepy too
! Short though! I have another very wierd story, it's called Ceridwen the Eden List

OK, ppl, I'm definitely weird reviewing this myself, only let it be known that the little "a" symbol is really the copyright symol- which my computer doesn't seem to like

~_^ Alira (can you say "computer troubles today"?)