wow this is great wow its sooo cool and powerful

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ps there is no ps lol

Your so right _ rock on with that additude youll get far in life keep it up and youll go where u want good luck

That was positive...cool

I agree 100%! Awesome piece! Keep writing!

Very good, thanks for reviewing my poem Make Believe

If a reader can relate to the author's words, then it's a good work of art. And I believe everyone can relate to this one.

I think this is a good piece. To be, it seems to be about the confusion of wanting or not wanting something. I like.