Hey there!
So I just finished this story, and it's absolutely fantastic. I was in tears at the end! I'm so sorry that I found it late, but I'm so happy that I got the chance to read through it.
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Ciao!
Dillon

I LOVE YOU.
Good chapter. Great chapter. all chapters are great

Alright...so, Author
I love you. Keep posting more. Sequel after sequel after sequel, I am addicted to you.
I give you praise.

Cleverly written chapter :D I'm enjoying your story!

Nice beginning, I'm going to keep reading :D

I must say that the last couple of chapters really touched me because I can relate to how he felt at the end. It was really sad and unfortunately I'm sure that somewhere out there that this is someone's real life story. You did a great job and I hope to see more works from you.

I must admit that I was expecting to read something more about chris in this chapter. The suspense is killing me. Well, time to read on

I must say that the begining of this chapter was a very nice touch of surprise. I like it a lot, it shows such creativity that sometimes become lost when a person tries too hard to create something. I'm very interested in reading the rest of this story.

Darling, Sweetheart, Love divine,

You have wonderful, psychotic characters! all the time. And I LOVE IT!

Sincerely,

paputsza aka virginymph

Did you get the name Ricki Martinez from the top of your head? Did it just seem like a "real" name, as in a name that sounds right but unique? Cuz there's a ricki martin too. Latin pop sensation actually. I wonder if i could get away with britany spear or Bob Marlei

Interesting plots you got here, I really like them. Be careful how you describe things though, sometimes it comes off a little half-arsed.

Just an example:"He pulled himself up on his own, unwilling to look like even more of a girl than he thought he did already."

That's one of the most overused ideas in slash fiction; gay guy being afraid of looking like a girl. Plus, this sentence implies that females can't do something as simple as stand up by themselves. Girls aren't helpless weaklings, that's just an inacurate stereotype, so the description doesn't really make sense.

I found it kind of amusing that the dudes name is Ricki Martinez (makes me think of Ricky Martin) and then there's talk of Marylin Manson, hahaha. Those two don't belong together. :P

I love it too. ^_^ Tad short, but still uber good. Now I'm off to the next bit. Fabulousness times like, 186483427374297. Squared. Yeah.

O.O

Almost made me cry. Again. Except my eyes were definitely tearing up here.

I seriously can't even say how much I liked about this, so I'm just going to say it now: I fecking loved this chapter and everything in it. You're an awesome writer, and I'm totally jealous. ^_^ lol

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Noo!! I can't believe Ricky actually left that note!! Poor Seritroe. You were right though, the impact was really big. ^_^ I love angst, don't you?

"Seritroe stopped dead as he saw a lone letter lying on the table like a dead leaf, curled slightly at either end. It was suddenly a symbol of his crushed hope, thin, alone, pathetic."

I think I'm in love with your descriptions as much as Seritroe is with Ricky. >.< Fantastic chapter as usual.