I was listening to Nirvana when I happened upon this, so naturally, I HAD to read! Although I found the subject matter of this poem intruiging, I have to say I was annoyed that you put a capital after ever comma. That's just the grammar Nazi in me rearing its head!

- Clap Trap, from Review Marathon [link in profile]

I absolutely love it. This is so real, and I like the ' When I taste, I fade away '... truly amazing... adding it to Favs Stories.

Amazing. I love Kurt and I love this poem. It seems so real.

That totally rocked, what can I say? I love Nirvana, and this really came off in Kurt's style. Very well written. I love how you wrap up...EVERYTHING. It's so neat, it tells so much. Cheers. This was super.

Wow! That was good! I like the end the best! Lol!
Anyways yeah
Bye
Jade

Ahh!Nirvana fans. I found more!*greedily stuffs people in a giant voodoo doll*ahahahaha...
er...yeah.
Okay,I assume the Aberdeen Bridge is a reference to the story in Something in the Way.When Kurt was a teen and not permitted to stay at his mom's,he'd sleep in hotel hallways and in boxes on Jesse Reed's front porch. The bridge was uninhabitable for staying under.He'd just occasionally sneak down there to get high.
Also, if this is in Kurt's point of view,then you got the facts wrong.When Kurt used to live in Grey's Harbor(or something like that)near Aberdeen, he was still a teen.He didn't try heroin till he was around his early twenties because he was afraid of needles till then.He generally did LSD and pot when he was younger.
And Name Taken, Courtney didn't pull the trigger. There is a documented case where an old friend of Kurt and Courtney's turned himself in after Courtney offered him money if he'd kill Kurt. He never did though. And Courtney was out of town when Kurt died, so she couldn't have done. There are many shifty details involving his death that could point to murder, but in all probability he killed himself. Look at the dozens of times he overdosed on heroin to the point where his skinned turned green. He generally did this as his popularity grew, and if Courtney were going to kill him,she wouldn't have injected him with a counter-narcotic and revived him all those times.
-Creep
"I'm stoned."

dude...sweet, kurt cobain is my god and i feel this reprsents him in full respect, i am sure he would love it himself if he could read it.

I dunno what to say...Im having a nervous breakdown...and I think Im getting mentally illl...alls so cheery

I hope you realize that Kurt Cobain DID NOT shoot himself and that Courtney Love did. Get the facts straight at least.