wow, well done, enjoyed it

*shivers* Bwahaha. The last line was perfect. Excellent...

This is good- very true, and a very interesting read :)(and I admit it, I did turn around...*grin* couldn't help it...) :)

Hey, nice poem! Creepy too. *shudder* When I read in your Author's Note "Now admit you turned around", I sorta did turn around...anyway, great! Yeah..

Very well done I liked it lots

PS. I didn't turn around

This is so cool!
The lines "I am the darkness/consuming your soul" deserves to be in a horror film somewhere!!
Diana x

o, angsty. nice job! it's really cool. hey, do me a favor and look over "running from death". i want to know what you think of it. thanks! ^_~

Another I do so enjoy! You write well, I like the images I get! Bravo!
~Whiro~

THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!

good job, well written.

OOOOOOOOO! GOOD! That was so freaking amazing.

oh, geez...
yeah the poem was great, i'm thinking, ooh, this is so deliciously spooky...
and then I read your author's note and I am crakcing up on the floor!!! great, funny, oh man.
oh, the poem was great, just fabulous
heh heh. *snort*

i must be really depressed or really strenge to be listening to stuff like this. don't get me wrong. i think its really good. really creepy too. write more!

i love this one, it reminds me of my story real daydreams, same kind of discription.

Do you have a soul tap to the darkest dreams of humanity? Never the less, you seem to know just the right way to put things in perspective. Talk to you later... Shadowgirl. -The Realms Dryfter .... by the way, your shadow ate the last of my pizza. Why is she still hanging around? ;)