Alright. This is still very good. Your story is very philosophical and I like that. However if you want to attract a crowd which isn't in to deep questions all the time you will have to blow some stuff up, some people will have to get their butts kicked etc. I will continue to return, read, and review when time permits.
Thanks,
Rance (curses busy life) Drai

Everything seems good here though the chapters are a bit but not unbearably long. I like the story and will check back again. Thanks for the review on conspiracy, I do format the story better in later chapters. Please keep up with my story just as I will be doing with yours.
Thanks,
Rance (needs to write more) Drai

This is really good. Everything is ship-shape and bristol fashion (as the saying goes) in everything I think of in stories. I'd like to get into it when I have more time. Leave a review on Conspiracy: Raven of Heaven (scratch my back I scratch yours) if you want me to check back (I forget to otherwise). Just as a note give the Conspiracy a chance it takes a bit to get going.
Thanks,
Rance (has never tried doing stream of consciousness, maybe ought to) Drai

Congratulations! ^.^ I'm so proud of you--you did it, just like you said you would, and just like I knew you would. Writing a novel is a big accomplishment! I enjoyed this a great deal. I like psychological-type stories. ^_^ So much happened! You know, I really feel as though I know you better from reading this novel. You're really good at descriptions! Yeah...this life might not be all that good, but sometimes there are pleasant experiences, and you *can* learn a great deal if you look. It's important to remember that and live each day for what it is--something *to* live, with all its potential for both evil and good. -.- I stop talking philosophy now. *dances* Sequel! O.O Geez, no sooner are you done one thing but I start poking for another. Anyway, thanks for sharing your thoughts with us--you've made *me* think, at least, and I think I learned a lot. I may not be able to understand everything fully, being lowly human, but I can at least have an appreciation. I do! *hugs* You're amazing, friend! ^.^

It's great to find something original to read. My friend Neo showed me this story, and then tried to force me to read it all in one day. He said I'd get just as wrapped up in it as he had, so I thought I'd pass the compliment on to you. I don't think I could've written a novel on a time limtit.

O.O!!!! DUDE! I've been having so much fun just getting here and reviewing a chapter-a-day that I've been paying no attention to the actual word count! YOUDIDIT!!! :D!!!! HOORAY FOR LYNNE! YOU'VE WRITTEN AN ENTIRE NOVEL IN A MONTH! WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! ^____^ *splats you with a celebration cake* :D! I'MGONNAGOREVIEWTHELASTCHAPTERNOW!!!
-^.^ Dancin! ^.0 You DO realize that you suddenly playing music like that means I'd probly start asking you how you did that and if you could teach me, right?
-YES! Emotions ARE energy! THAT'S EXACTLY RIGHT! :D!!
->.O Errrr...I SO want to hear this, even if it doesn't exist in anything but your mind! *is already twitching with the insane urge to dance, and the several pounds of Thanksgiving candy she has eaten is doing nothing to help this*
-Lynne's Food: >D You cannot resist us! Come to the Dark Side, Lynne! MWAAAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!
->.O Cold.....
-"Live, co-exist with other humans, reproduce, raise a family…" o.o'' It sounds like you're talking about a hamster....
-^_^ I like plants...*said as if her room WASN'T filled with loads of potted plants on every available surface and a small yucca tree in the middle of the floor*
-WHOOOOO AGAAAAIIIN! ^_______^ AND MORE CONGRATULATIONS AND CAKE AND SUCH! Oh, and if you've noticed, I never really made any chapter-distinctions in all my reviews, mostly just leaping right into the reviewing. That's because I want you to take all of these thingies and smush them into one MEGA-review which is probably approaching small novel-size right now, too. ^-^;;....^_~! See ya on Sunday! Hopefully! ^.^;;

Right now, I'm kinda going back and forth between typing this and doing that survey doohickie you sent me earlier. Whoo-hoo. Let's hear it for molasses-slow vacation computers. >_O Aaaah, I shouldn't complain. At least it's a COMPUTER.
-O.O!!! DUDE! We're IN this chapter! ^___^ YOU MAKE ME HAPPY! I HAVE BEEN IMMORTALIZED! *glompattackhug*
->.o Protoplasmic **-dragon blob...I should NOT be getting the urge to DRAW something like that! ACK! STOPPIT, BRAIN! DOWN! BAD IMAGINATION! *insert squinty-eyed face here, since ff.net would eat my review if I actually made one*
-Oooo, THAT'S how we're all together. I thought we had an impromptu meet-everybody thingie...doohickey. >.O Need...better...vocabulary...
-Awww, Lynne, you be so cold!
-O______O?!! OOOO? Music?!?? *is already looking forward to the next chapter*

Hehe, I managed to sneak on a computer to check my email and read a few stories. >:]
-O.O!! EEEEK! LEMON-FLAVORED VACUUMS! You...you don't WORK for them, do you?! *squints an eye at you suspiciously*
-Hee..murals! ^^
-Mmmyeah. Emotion is part of the whole human package dealie. Gotta keep it, or you don't get the karmic frequent flyer miles. *nods sagely*
-Swiss ca...OOOOO! HO-HOS!!! O____O!!! *congratulations, you have found one of the five or so foods that Kat would soley exist on if it were physically possible*
-Pleah. Hopefully, I'll get on a computer several more times over Thanksgiving break. If I do, I'll check this in case of updates. ^_^

-"Part of living as a human, was living among them." *nods* Mmyep. Necessary evil, unless you want to be a crazy old hermit who likes to eat beetles and talk to his rocking chair. Uh...her rocking chair. Oo''
-*sigh* Now THAT would rock. I think I'd go through the whole ordeal you went through (or its logical equivalent) just to be able to play any instrument I saw. Rather low goal, but STILL! I'd love it. ^^
-OOO! :D Music of the worlds! ^^
-Hmmm...I heard a story somewhere where a certain song by a certain classical composer was supposed to be based on the music of Earth...drat, who was the composer? Chopin? Bach? Somebody famous with a name that wasn't spelled the way it was said.
-Fiddle...OOO! That reminds me! I was gonna tell you about that fiddle puppet show I went to! ^^ It was great. It was supposed to be about the creation of the fiddle (the whole of which was made up for the play), and then the subsequent mini-war Heaven and Hell waged for it, both claiming that the fiddle was an instrument that belonged in their domain. At the end, the angels were fighting, the demons were crying, and the old man who had been narrating the story, turned out to be the devil. He ended up playing the fiddle just to make everyone happy again! ^.^ The whole time I was wishing I could tape it or something to show everyone...
-XD! Bumper cars...
-O.o'' Thousand miles...yeeeeek...
-Aaaand you're back home! O.o *wondering what happens NOW...*

-^^ And again, I must say: Yay for Aubri.
-Hehe, dragon teachers...^^
-Ooo, you're back to human! o.o

->.o Drat. It ate my review again.
-Hmm...o.o Actually, that makes sense. If Xenofen already knew what every possible outcome to every possible plan was, then he'd never want to plan, because the novelty of day-to-day life would be gone then. Complete spontaneity would be the only way to have any sort of interest in his life.
-Good grief, it would be terrifying to know everything at once...
-Hehe, good choice of words; your 'vacation' from humanity.
-^____^ The music of worlds. Now that's something I would love to hear.

-Hmm...getting his ATTENTION,rather than trying to hunt him down. That makes sense.
-Ooo, that's a bit creepy. Xenofen being what you are NOW...I'm just imagining what could drive YOU to become something like HIM. O.o'''
-Oooo, you're calling him. Scaaary. MUST READ MORE! @____@
-YEEP! >.

I'm trying to read as much of this as possible before I have to go to class again, because I'm taking a break from paper-outlining to eat, but I have to comment right now! This last chapter was absolutely beautiful. Maybe it resonates with me because I'm so attuned with music. I hope my soul was there with you dancing! ^.^ (Though I am of course sticking to last night's vow to never dance in public again. u.u;;;) I'm glad to see that you found some good harmony, if only for a time. The whole need for conflict in stories can be a pain when you're in a good mood, and I think that you need a chapter like this to set a positive standard--to exemplify that state that you're striving for, and to make it clear that it is indeed attainable. And, also, to make any impending conflict even more shattering when it does come up! O.O;; Okay, on with reading while I still have this time!

-^^ *cheers on the spindle-thing-destroying*
-o.o' I wonder how the spindles got there in the first place. I mean, they think that what they're doing is RIGHT, so who convinced them of that? WHAT convinced them of that? They seemed to recognize you for what you were, so how did they know of dragons before? Are they inherently disruptive to the universe, or was it something they learned, a mindset? How did they become so advanced in traveling energy planes and yet remain unaware of their disruption? Does everything ELSE look disruptive to them, with themselves as the center of calm? Are the-....9.9'' *looks at all she just wrote* Uhh....nevermind. ^.^'' Do go on.
-^_^ Mmmm...library...
-OOoo, the frumpy old name again! ^^
-O.O' He destroyed a WORLD?!! His HOME?!!! '''O.O'''
-O.o Normally, I like chaos, but this is.../nasty/ chaos. It's..cold chaos. It is chaos with no respect, no mind behind it other than a capricious being who acts on whims, seeing the universe and all within as insignificant. It is a spoiled two-year-old with a subatomic weapon. >.

-Ooo, hey, that does make sense for the crimson dragon to "try on" a human form. Especially since he's so interested in 'em. ^^
-Hehe! The girl's a mini-Lynne!
-XD!! *bursts out laughing at the old man calling Castigacide a "cheesy old name."*
-*laughs more at the "they'd burn out your corneas" line*
-EEK! THERE BE THE GLOWY EYES! *points wildly*
-Hmm, inneresting...Aubri still calls you "Lynne." Oo Come to think of it, you still call him "Aubri." >.O Ack, I do not question the Almighty Author. *keeps reading*
-Hehe, infecting you... >( You WILL be calm! You WILL be calm or I bite your head!
-XD "Be my guest." Good way to put it. ^.^