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| Hexic 2004-06-24 ch 1,   | sometimes i wish i could do tht too... ~hexic~ |
| CCLD-Blade 2004-03-19 ch 1, | Wonderful poem... reminds me of me >. |
| Sallymander 2004-02-02 ch 1, | Oh my! Sort of creepy and scary. Reminds me of a friend...anyway, great poem |
| wastedlovexxx 2003-11-22 ch 1, | it is short but at the same time very deep and true.Please check out some of my poems and review on them!! |
| killingaurora 2003-11-20 ch 1, | What can I say? Your poem is so original...defyingly refreshing. |
| sunkist deathmints 2003-10-12 ch 1, | Hey, you read my poem "Here's to Being Human" and you reviewed. And I have this thing where whoever reviews my poems, I review theirs. Sorta like a, "I really appreciate you reading my poems, now I will return the favor." Kind of thing. So anyway... I really really liked the last part, "Flowing past the faded white scars/ A sharp pain/ And it all fades away." It tells so much in just three lines and that's a hard thing to do. Great job! |
| Lady Ezri 2003-10-11 ch 1, | short and sweet...makes me think of my own voices sometimes...they are all messed, though hapful somedays... |
| Jupiter 2003-08-17 ch 1, | I like the style you used in the poem, I think your insight into the girl makes her too impulsive tho, it depends on the cutter I guess, I imagine most dwell on the thoughts long or at least moments before they take action especially if the last line implies complete suicide and not just one session, might they contemplate on the action's validity and finality? Although you captured the most potent actions in the poem which makes it strong non-the-less. I did, however, enjoy the ending to the poem, descriptive and potent without too many words. Good job. :) |
| Asmodeus Sanity 2003-08-05 ch 1, | exactly! well, 4 me at least. good job, i like how u put in quotie thingies |
| Fae Caspian 2003-06-11 ch 1, | i read this aloud to one of my friends, the first word was "whoa" i thought, "powerful" right on |
| Aftertaste of a Razorblade 2003-06-04 ch 1, | Wow. Takes my breath away. Insightful and wonderfully done. |
| Shadow 3013 2003-05-26 ch 1, | Too many commas for my tastes, and it should be you're instead of your, but otherwise this was very good. Sad, but it happens a lot more than most people want to realize/think. |
| lee 2003-04-29 ch 1, | i like it...i've written some of these myself... |
| Suicidal Butterfly 2002-11-30 ch 1, | Nice one. I love the last line. More poetry soon yes>? |
| elijahwoodsangel 2002-11-02 ch 1, | i can soooooo relate to that! why didn't noone review? it's *fantastic*! |